Thursday, December 25, 2008

Paradise in the ear

Hey kids! tell me what pitchurs this paints in your minds, kay? I wanna know if they match mine, or if they're weird :P peace

I sing of an immense anatomy of sound
Speak
Murmur
Solitary voices
Ecstatic music
Sound meanders through time
The
machine
breaks
Under the sun
A flash
Her hair in the light
Her voice in the air
I swim
in a sea
of words

Paradise in the ear

2 comments:

kathickers said...

I like this 'cause it's like one of those moments in a movie where guy is looking at girl and everything just slows down all the sound fades and is just so much unimportant noise and he sees her smile and laugh and falls in love with her for the first time or all over again. Of course, I am a closet romantic and tend to interpret things literally. There's a really sense of lightness that I like. What were you going for?--I'm curious.

Benjamin said...

convincing thought process. it reads like i think. this is my head in words

thanks :]